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【初三英语作文求修改!在线等,好的追分!intheseyear,myhometownhaschangedalot.inthepast,myhometownwassmallandthepeopleintherewereverypoorsotheirhouseswereold.pollutionwasserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.th】
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初三英语作文求修改!在线等,好的追分!

intheseyear,myhometownhaschangedalot.inthepast,myhometownwassmallandthepeopleintherewereverypoorsotheirhouseswereold.pollutionwasserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.thetrafficwasnotconvenient,soonlyfewvisitorscomeheresometimes.nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourhometown.people'shousesisbiggerthanbefore.andmanypeoplehavetheirowncar.sothetrafficisconvenientnow!themountainshaveturnedgreener,therivershaveturnedclearer,theskyhasturnedbluer.what'smore,manyvisitorscometomyhometownforvisitingfascinatingsights.manypeoplesaidthathometown'ssightsmakethemfeelwell.Ibelievethatmyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture!ilovemyhometownsomuch.

任明仑回答:
  你的英语作文写得很好,语言优美,形象生动,描绘了自己家乡的变化.但是也有一些小瑕疵,我把直接改好的写在下面,你参考一下Intheseyears,myhometownhaschangedalot.Inthepast,myhometownwasasmalltownwh...
麻文斗回答:
  能帮忙分析一下你写的inthepast的那句话吗。。有点不理解那个句式
任明仑回答:
  Inthepast,myhometownwasasmalltownwherethepeopleweresopoorthattheirhouseswereold.这句话是一个定语从句,先行词是town,用where引导,在从句中作地点状语;后面的是so...that...句型,如此...以至于...这句话的意思是:在过去,我的家乡是一个小乡镇,这里的人如此贫穷以至于他们的房子是旧的。
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