问题标题:
【"Hopingtojointhisprogramalsooutoftheconsiderationofmyfuturecareerlife.""Heearnedthescholarshipthroughhishardworkingandoutstandingperfomance."很中国式英语啊,能力有限,高人能否把它改得正宗一点啊.】
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"Hopingtojointhisprogramalsooutoftheconsiderationofmyfuturecareerlife."
"Heearnedthescholarshipthroughhishardworkingandoutstandingperfomance."
很中国式英语啊,能力有限,高人能否把它改得正宗一点啊.
胡湘陵回答:
第一句不错.
第二句:
through->for
hardworking是形容词,修饰perfomance
改为hardworking好点
outstanding一般修饰acchievements好点,比较少见其修饰perfomance
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