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【"Hopingtojointhisprogramalsooutoftheconsiderationofmyfuturecareerlife.""Heearnedthescholarshipthroughhishardworkingandoutstandingperfomance."很中国式英语啊,能力有限,高人能否把它改得正宗一点啊.】
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"Hopingtojointhisprogramalsooutoftheconsiderationofmyfuturecareerlife."

"Heearnedthescholarshipthroughhishardworkingandoutstandingperfomance."

很中国式英语啊,能力有限,高人能否把它改得正宗一点啊.

胡湘陵回答:
  第一句不错.   第二句:   through->for   hardworking是形容词,修饰perfomance   改为hardworking好点   outstanding一般修饰acchievements好点,比较少见其修饰perfomance
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