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【雅思作文评分剑5test4task2Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonlaityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.whichdouconsidertobemajorinfluence?Inthisda】
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雅思作文评分

剑5test4task2

Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonlaityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.

whichdouconsidertobemajorinfluence?

Inthisdayandage,researchfromscientistsshowsthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreimpactonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthanexperiencewehaveinourlife.Frommyperspective,Iconsistthatourcharacteristicsarelessimportantthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.

Ontheonehand,ourparentsnurtureingusplaysaparamountrolefromwegrowingup.Whatweexperienceisthatweshouldfocuson.Forinstance,whenachildthoughtoneplusoneisthree,hisorherparentsmusthaveshownthecorrectansweristwo.Throughthisfailedexperience,thechildwillrememberthisequation.Futhermore,onejuvenilepersonmightbecultivatedacelebrity,thoughheorsheisnotagenius,ornotintelligentatall.Parentscanchangechildrenwhattheythink,orhowtheydo.Moreprecisely,manyordinaryadolescencescanhavegoodpersonalityanddevelopment,althoughttheyarenotgeniuses.Additonally,somedisableschildrenmightbecomefamouspeopleoweingtotheirperents’nurtureandencouragement.Ifcleverchildrendidnotbecultivatedbytheirparents,geniuseswouldbecomeordinarypeople.

Ontheotherhand,itismanifestthatchildrenhavetheflawlesscharacteristicsfromparentsisverycrucial.Admittedlly,geniusesyoutheseasilyachievetheirgoals,becomecelebrities.Moreover,whatisneeded,theeducationisthekey.Onlydointelligentchildrenstudyingooduniversities,theycanusethepetentiontheyhave.Naturalcharacteristicsareindispensableaswell.

Tosumup,characteristicsorexperiences,whichhavemoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddavelopment,itisacontroversialargumentinthecontemporaryworld.Pesonally,Ibelievethatexperienceswemayhavemoreimpactonourpesonalityanddevelopment.

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  雅思作文评分没人敢乱评的,除非是有相当的经验的老师或者考官,他们都有很详细的评价标准,不过这种评分一般是收费的==   你可以自己尽量改作文看看能不能写得更好,然后再与范文比照比照,看看差距,单看你的写作质量估计是在6-7的水平,但是偏短可能会有折扣呀.   反正作文就是要小心,怎么用功都不过,咱当年就是一门作文考烂了==
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